Revisions for CFP

This is my revision for the CFP. It looks really similar to the first one, but atleast in the new one I have the right deadline, website, AND I have the correct focus, the book. So..
I hope this is better.
It actually took me a lot of time, I had more camera trouble again. But this time, it was with the camera itself, not the software I needed to upload the movie. I plan to share that story in class on Thursday because it made me get goosebumps. YIKES!