Comments on: My Three Critical Lenses

Comments on: My Three Critical Lenses http://strangerheremyselff.wordpress.com/2008/09/02/my-three-critical-lenses/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 17 Sep 2008 20:47:59 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: AJmC http://strangerheremyselff.wordpress.com/2008/09/02/my-three-critical-lenses/#comment-4 AJmC Wed, 03 Sep 2008 15:17:19 +0000 http://strangerheremyselff.wordpress.com/?p=13#comment-4 <a href="http://www.kevincarterfilm.com/" rel="nofollow">A documentary about Kevin Carter and his famous photo<a>. It's legit awesome, though there's a section with his daughter at the end that's really, really uncomfortable and weird. Short, too. Also, I want to see more from your first lens. In the other two, you gave me both the lens and the "why." And I'm certainly going to allow for you to know what you're writing about if I failing to read it clearly. I just want you to keep in mind why "relevance and appeal" are important to you in your text examination. But I'm willing to bet the failure is on the reader's part and not the author's. A documentary about Kevin Carter and his famous photo . It’s legit awesome, though there’s a section with his daughter at the end that’s really, really uncomfortable and weird. Short, too.

Also, I want to see more from your first lens. In the other two, you gave me both the lens and the “why.” And I’m certainly going to allow for you to know what you’re writing about if I failing to read it clearly. I just want you to keep in mind why “relevance and appeal” are important to you in your text examination. But I’m willing to bet the failure is on the reader’s part and not the author’s.

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